Blood

• Artist: Gwenetrina
• Description: This is the first I submit my masterpiece. I wrote this during a very boring lesson at school. Please rate and comment. Thank you! Have a nice day!
• Date: 01/24/2009
• Tags: blood knife love

Rain dropped
A sudden cold swept over me
I felt something on my cheek
I touched it
It's blood
His blood
I licked it
It's nice
I kissed him on the forehead
He didn't move
He just looked at me
I said goodbye to him
And walked away from the dark street
The next day
I saw him on the television
He's really handsome
Sitting against the wall
With a knife in his heart

Comments

[XxBeautifulxLiesxX]

its not that great.i write poetry all the time in english class.and no poetry isnt the lesson we are working on.i can do better than this wit my eyes closed.just take a look at some of mine.1/5

[Tammy220]

thats realy boring no efens

[Frisky Shadow]

This is no where close to a masterpiece. And judging by your writing, you're very far from producing a masterpiece. Oh, and pay attention in school, maybe you would actually gain the intelligence to write work thats actually worth submitting ANYWHERE...