truly sad

• Artist: Young_ for _G 45
• Description: i at leas thad to check this for 15 mins i hope you like it!
  
• Date: 01/24/2009
• Tags: trulysad

What you do is almost death like and very cruel and nasty you abuse me like I'm a doll death to be told for you upon any man you are the worst this needs to stop I'm putting a end to it now this abusive thing you are doing is showing no compassion at all saying you the are head of the house hold no you are not then look at yourself and I swear as my name is kebyia ross your soul will rotten in the pits of hell men like you should die instantly within a heart beat I have gave you to many chances this is what you call devilshly stupid and nasty makes me wanna cry actually the crying is stoping now as well no more crying no more going beyond your limit but it's coming into a end

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[Fo-eights Beach Fo-eights]

What the last person said, but in english and now for my patented spelling corrections;
death-like
an end
you are the head of the household
rot in
heartbeat
too many chances
stopping
That's all.
=)

[nones here anymore]

it's good in cotext, it just needs punctuation, a littlke re-arranging, capitolization and a few people to look it overand it's be a great poem.