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It’s a damn cold day
I try to find my way
Through the crowd of people on the streets
The roads are frozen
No cars are passing by
I keep on walking and start to cry
Kids are on the road using it as a skating ring
All of a sudden I hear an angel sing
A song that makes me weep
I see a light that burns
I hear a car as it tries to turn
But can’t and is going at the kids
I wasn’t really thinking as I ran out in the road
I was scared for the children that were having so much fun
So I had to get it done
That dreadful day I had been killed
By a driver that was high
But I knew I did the right thing as I floated up into the sky
- by dancingirl101101 |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 01/25/2009 |
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- Title: That Damn Cold Day
- Artist: dancingirl101101
- Description: just a poem i wrote wen i as bored. its about a girl that gave her life 2 save a bunch of kids.
- Date: 01/25/2009
- Tags: damn cold thedamncoldday
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Comments (7 Comments)
- oXPinkAngelXo - 06/01/2009
- this is AWESOME!!!!!i LOVE the third stanza...5/5!!!
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- Stranger Than Thought - 01/27/2009
- run along kiddies and dont get other ppl killed!!!! smile 5 stars, as usual
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- dancingirl101101 - 01/26/2009
- idk y i wrote bout death it just came and no this isnt something that happened i based it on another situation
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- One_Blue_moon2010 - 01/26/2009
- OMG! why are poems here includes death? but whatever ^.^i love the topic death and It was awesome giving her life ^.^ i feel the emotion trough the words ^.^ ( did thid really happen? it sounds real ehehehe)
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- dancingirl101101 - 01/25/2009
- thx smile
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- kathy_stunz - 01/25/2009
- omg i luv it especially the last stanza
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- dancingirl101101 - 01/25/2009
- sorry i meant wen i *was* bored
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