Lost in the Mind

• Artist: Keniqua
• Description: rantings of a crazy person...
• Date: 01/26/2009
• Tags: lost mind

Stuck in the ground
No one around
Can’t hear a sound
Trapped here forever, eternally bound

Clenching fists
Hours missed
Feelings dissed
Case dismissed

Can’t hardly see
In front of me
Here I will be
Here in the sea

Down falls the rain
A fallen crane
A beautiful mane
All so insane

Song being sung
Time not begun
A ringing rung
Getting done

Just killing time
Silent as mimes
Clattering dimes
A crime's still a crime

Beginning to fly
Can’t really try
Seeing blind
Nothing I find

Love is forever
Never say never
Yet is ever
Sneaking so clever

Edges seared
Yet never here
Coincidence near
Living in fear

Calling the movers
Hating the users
Crazy moochers
Scared of the future

Sighting the scene
Cunning and keen
Discharge the mean
Breaking the screen

Teeth being bit
Found the First Aid kit
Distracted and missed it
Fighting the distance

Feelings now exposed
Faking masks composed
Losing what’s been posed
Yet no one truly knows

Comments

[emmywinner56]

i get what you mean Fo-eights Beach Fo-eights. but it is one of the better poems i've read.i really liked the 'clenching fists' stanza and from 'song being sung' to 'a crime's still a crime'.i think when it got off, that's what made it really become realistic; like it was actually written by a crazy person expressing themselves.

[Fo-eights Beach Fo-eights]

The beginning and the end were really good, the middle was a little off.
I'm sorry I can't be more specific but I don't really no what I mean. It's not off, just some of the rhymes and wording are off.
I'm going to stop making sense now.
=) =S
It's still one of the much better poems on here.