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"Love Story: Romeo"
Music and some lyrics by Taylor Swift, the rest by me.
We were both young when I first saw you,
I close my eyes, and the flashback starts
I'm standing there
Sad and lifeless and without a care
See the lights, see the parties, the ballgowns
See your face and think, "I'm in love now," with this girl
Who would soon be my entire world
I snuck out to your house and I was throwing pebbles
And your daddy said stay away from Juliet
But I was on my hands and knees and was begging him let me stay
And I said, Juliet wait for me, someday we'll be all alone
I'll be waiting for that day to finally come,
I'll be the prince and you'll be the princess,
It's a love story, baby just say yes.
I'd sneak out to your garden to see you,
I'd see your smile and say I love you, too,
Wish you could stay, forever wrapped up in my embrace
But they all told me no because you were Juliet,
And there's no such thing as Montagues and Capulets!
And I was standing out your window, saying I had to go
And I said, Juliet wait for me, someday we'll be all alone
Just keep waiting for me and one day I'll come,
I'll be the prince and you'll be the princess,
It's a love story, baby just say yes.
Please don't cry Juliet because I know just how you feel,
This love is difficult, but it's real
Don't be afraid, we'll make it out of this mess,
It's a love story baby just say yes.
So I left for a while,
To let them know that you and me were meant to be,
I longed to see your smile,
So I rushed home and saw you waiting for me,
I saw you, standing there Juliet, looking like you're so alone
I know you've been waiting for me but I've finally come,
It's not in your head, I have something to request,
So I knelt to the ground and pulled out a ring and said
Marry me, Juliet, you'll never have to be alone
I love you and that's all I really know
I talked to your dad, you'll pick out a white dress,
It's a love story, baby just say yes.
Oh, oh, Oh, oh
Cause we were both young when I first saw you.
- Title: "Love Story: Romeo"
- Artist: Kalawyn
- Description: So yeah, this isn't completely original, since I tweaked Taylor Swift's hit single "Love Story" because I always wondered everytime I heard this song, "what would Romeo say/sing to Juliet?" So I adjusted it so that it'd be from his perspective. My friends say they love it, so I hope you all do too. :)
- Date: 01/28/2009
- Tags: love story romeo
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Comments (7 Comments)
- Kalabelle - 11/15/2009
- This is beautiful! I wish Taylor Swift could see this! Wish I could hear it sung!
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- Kalawyn - 01/31/2009
- Haha, yeah! I read the first 264 pages of Midnight Sun...the only pages of that book that will ever see the light of day... smile ! But yeah, I really enjoyed writing the "other side" of TS's song. It was nice.
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- PrimeOdd - 01/30/2009
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It's perfect. smile
Reminds me of a released version of "Midnight Sun." xDD - Report As Spam
- fireshadowkatdemon - 01/30/2009
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Oh, wow this is really nice. 5/5. It was kind of ironic I was listening to this song just as this came onto the screen. Cool. I love it. Keep writing, er... you know what I mean!
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- libraryprincess - 01/29/2009
- wow so much better than the original imagine in the duet with the originals and these lyrics so cool
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- Kalawyn - 01/28/2009
- Thank you. smile
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- BonesXBreak - 01/28/2009
- very nice, very nice.
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