-
Blinking in and fading out,
Consciousness is high in doubt.
Swimming in a sea of fog,
Sight gives out but not for long.
Waking in a drug-like daze
Darkness captured in your gaze.
Room is spinning, round and round-
Limp, white body hits the ground.
- Title: Spinning
- Artist: _Roooose_
- Description: comment D;
- Date: 01/29/2009
- Tags: spinning
- Report Post
Comments (5 Comments)
- ii applebottomjeans ii - 01/24/2010
-
craap i was tryin 2 giv it 5 stars but i did sumthin and it only gave u 1!!! now im sad cuz i meant 2 giv u 5!!!
;( - Report As Spam
- Lord Bubbleygirl - 07/13/2009
- this is very good! will u comment my poems?
- Report As Spam
- Picturesque Honey - 04/12/2009
- very well done!
- Report As Spam
- fireshadowkatdemon - 02/01/2009
- Awsome! I love this. 5/5. ^ ^ Comment back too plz on my poems.
- Report As Spam
- Xx-Forgotten Mist-xX - 01/30/2009
- it beautiful ^^ expresive and vidual comment back? oh ^^ and 5/5
- Report As Spam
- |
- |
-
Submit
