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life is to short,
Grudges are a waste of perfect happiness,
Apologize when you should,
And let go of what you can't change,
Love deeply and forgive quickly,
take chances... give everything,
and have no regrets,
life is too short to be unhappy,
you have to take the good with the bad,
smile when you're sad,
love what you got,
and always remember what you had,
always forgive but never forget,
learn from your mistakes,
but never regret,
people change, and things go wrong,
but always remember,
LIFE GOES ON!
- Title: Life Goes On
- Artist: Lex2442
- Description: this is something i wrote. It is very important to me. Please do not leave harsh or mean comments. just tell me what i did wrong and what I should fix.
- Date: 01/29/2009
- Tags: hurts around
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Comments (4 Comments)
- Gravetye - 02/17/2009
- This is nice...though you tend to repeat sentiments. Like, you mention forgiving and have no regrets twice. Also, the meter is all over the place... The best part of the poem are the last six lines.
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- Lex2442 - 02/03/2009
- ty! ty!
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- Valle Fresco - 02/02/2009
- *claps* real deep stuff. Deff digging it
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- Valle Fresco - 02/02/2009
- *claps* real deep stuff. Deff digging it
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