Why?

• Artist: ii_Poked_U
• Description: Just my in school life. ive got a couple friends. its gotten better but its still not good. and im not emo. its just how i feel
• Date: 01/29/2009
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Why?
Why must i take this?
Why do they all shun me?
Did i do something wrong?
Or do they just hate me?
Why, i ask,
Must they treat me this way?
If i reply it will just get worse.
But if i dont do anything it wont get any better.
Why cant they leave me alone?
Leave me be, to live my life?
Why....
Why...

Comments

[Daddy Got This Account]

well, those last two comments are stupid. i like your poem. poetry, is MEANT to relieve stress, and express your emotions. all poetry is NOT happy. and id be pissed if it was. i hope you can ignore thos epeople down there, because they know nothing about true poetry. 10/5

[sweet_awesome_giri]

umm....so i say ur depressed...u wnt be 4 long...and i think imma give it a 3/5 fair enough .....

[- It Gives Me Wings -]

Far too depressing for someone with my tastes. I think you need to take your pain out somewhere else, not in the arena. 1/5, sorry, but this is not good writing...