Anorexia

• Artist: miss89
• Description: A poem I made last year when I.. well, didn't felt very well.. hope you like it:)
• Date: 02/04/2009
• Tags: anorexia

You're over me again
like a pain flushing up.
Im sitting alone, walk alone - I am alone
only with you by my side, vanish!
You're not a friend, only an enemy
who conquer and spread chaos.

You are not welcome, I dont want your company
your laugh, your pain you eternal evil.
I don't wan you - deep inside i thought
you were dead and gone for ever!
Why have you come back?
I dont want your company.

Grabs my waist and thinks:
"Why me?"
You only reply with your evil laugh
Im hurt, shaking and the tears
are rolling down my cheeks like pearls on a line.
Why me?

You have come back once to take over
this time I won't let you.
You have brought so much pain and destruction
now its time you disappear for ever!
Take you pain, your destruction and disappear!
You will never hurt me again.

Comments

[BiggieSmall123]

I agree, it is an interesting title.
hehe, it's like one of those poems that needs to be analyzed because i KNOW there's a deeper meaning/feeling than what's actaully there..y`kno?


I love this poem, but i wish I knew what it was really talking about..

The way it sounds direct but theres that question of to who/what makes it all unique!

5/5

[kryptic_valiance]

Interesting title. This is very nice, but maybe you should add more sensory detail. Let's actually "feel" the pain. Words like "pain" are used too many times. Try and use a thesaurus. It's pretty good, but it's not THAT good. It's in the upper middle.