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I cant feel my body,
just a head,
floating in the middle of darkness,
devotion,
love,
the only things keeping me alive,
i stare up at the old cracked ceiling,
I feels my eyelids force themselves closed,
i resist and pry them open,
just staring,
my entire body burned,
especially my neck,
swelling,
closing,
I had a hard time breathing,
the bite mark bled,
the warm crimson red blood trickled down my neck,
it sent a shiver up my spine,
the burning grew intense,
I let out a moan of pain,
I try to scream,
but break out in a fit of coughs,
i felt myself fading,
drowning myself in darkness,
my eyes close,
drifting away,
i say my final goodbyes,
I fall into a deep dark sleep,
I suddenly awaken,
i bolt upright,
and slowly fall back down because of the pain,
sweating,
panic ing,
I look up and find my self staring into the eyes of a strange man,
dressed in a weird coat,
loaded with weapons of all kind,
his teeth glinted in the light,
i hear him yelp in pain,
a scent fills my nose,
it putts me in a hypnotized state,
i sit upright,
no pain,
where did this sudden strength come from,
I crawl toward the drop of blood on the ground,
i must have been from the man his finger was bleeding,
i lick it up for reasons i don't even know of,
dumbfounded, i look up at him,
he stares back at me,
and in a deep mysterious voice says,
"Welcome,
welcome to the hunt."
- by icrzypanda72 |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 02/09/2009 |
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- Title: Bitten
- Artist: icrzypanda72
- Description: Ummm...idk bored
- Date: 02/09/2009
- Tags: bitten
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Comments (5 Comments)
- Liffyjoo - 04/15/2009
- Nice ending, and good poem overall. 5/5
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- Bridget Paloumar - 02/11/2009
- It would be better as a story.
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- icrzypanda72 - 02/10/2009
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thx guys
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- jdude1012 - 02/10/2009
- It's pretty good. It could have a few more meaningful words in it.
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- wertyujhgfvbnjkuy - 02/10/2009
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Hmm, it was pretty good actually razz
Maybe you should write stories next time. You'd be good at it. xD - Report As Spam