Beautiful eyes

• Artist: Kuma Naru
• Description: Well, I was sitting in math class and I just got an idea to right a poem^^
  I dont think this is so bad, but like I've said before, Im not a poet...but here you go anyways, hope you like it!
• Date: 02/12/2009
• Tags: beautiful eyes

Oh beautiful eyes, Oh beautiful eyes
You sparkle like the stars and stain like scars.

Oh beautiful eyes, Oh beautiful eyes
Your the colour of due, and you sing a lovely hue.

Oh beautiful eyes, Oh beautiful eyes
Your killing me slowly; So painful it is.

Oh beautiful eyes, Oh beautiful eyes
When will you stop teasing me, and let me sore free?

Oh beautiful eyes, Oh beautiful eyes
You hold my heart, and you grip it tight.

Oh beautiful eyes, Oh beautiful eyes
You pierce into my soul.

Oh beautiful eyes, Oh beautiful eyes
Why wont you ever listen?

Oh beautiful eyes, Oh beautiful eyes
You locked me up, and threw away the key

Oh beautiful eyes, Oh beautiful eyes
Keep me in this cage, and forever watch me.

Comments

[tksunshine93]

I like it. The repetitiveness enhances the sense of complete loss of control. Well written, even if you think you're not a poet =)