Hatred's Lullabye

• Artist: PurpleSmarties_11
• Description: a poem i wrote in 10 mins
• Date: 02/12/2009
• Tags: hatreds lullabye

People die and people cry
the world has changed
and so have we
look what we have become to be.

Love is fading
but we keep on hating
the world is changing
with all the bad things still remaining.

we watch it fill
with hurt and greed
and end up all
dieing in need.

the world used to be a beautiful place
but now it's turning into disgrace.

with a million problems
we have to face
there's too much to deal with
at our own pace.

soon all what will be left
is our goodbyes
and the repetitive tune
of hatred's lullabye.

Comments

[Cleo511]

You have some good ideas in there, but I think it could use a little refining. And it's a little too rhyme-y for my taste. Mentioning that you only wrote it in 10 minutes just makes it seem cheap.