benchwarmer

• Artist: canoli66
• Description: this is about some kid who sits on the bench during the whole baseball game. its not me, im good, i made the allstar team.
• Date: 02/14/2009
• Tags: benchwarmer

I sit on the hard wooden bench,
as i watch the other kids play.
Their smiles bring out the joy in them,
that joy i do not have.
I tell the coach im ready to play,
he tells me we dont need you right now as i walk back to the cold bench.
There i look to center feild through the very rusted fence,
i see number 44 make an outstanding catch.
I tip my hat to him,
as if i made the catch myself.
I will keep my spirit high,
hoping for coach to give me a chance.

Comments

[jayke2010]

nice i like it

[sxyfunsize]

i liked wat the poem was about but i think you could have used better words and some lines were really long compared to the other lines but besides that it was really good

[kstarbaby_1234]

it's great but y a roach talks.