love.

• Artist: Dj Smexigirl
• Description: love
• Date: 02/15/2009
• Tags: love

love is love
love is sweet
love bites
love can stink
when you have found
your perfect match
you know your life
your path
is set
living
loving
crying
kissing
you can not
find them
without
these tools
some belive
in destiny
some do not
i belive in destiny
and will soon tie the knot

Comments

[Gerard_Ray_Frank]

Try editing it. Maybe make it more descriptive. http://www.gaiaonline.com/arena/writing/poetry-and-lyrics/vote/?entry_id=101173025 Read that, it might give you a better idea of what to shoot for.