Sweet Bread

• Artist: Kibroth
• Description: A "Holiday Poem" of a different color.
  
  Born partially in response to the...less than satisfying Gaia Valentine's event, interspersed with the slow simmering meloncollie of the infamous day in question.
  
  Try to read between the lines.
• Date: 02/16/2009
• Tags: sweet bread gluttony valentines love

Slowly consuming
Tender flesh, lovingly

This cannibalism
A gluttony, insatiable

Unrelenting, dry eyed remorseless
Craving atonement felt far too deep
Digging to bare bone…
Fair turn

Tilling into
Viscera velveteen
Sweet & fresh
Rousing
This squirming larval love
Forming wings to fly
Intent to repeat
Cycle, instinctual
Unbroken
Unchanging
Unthinking

Retched drones

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[Kibroth]

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-K

[_Roooose_]

Yep, the few changes did make it better.
:]