emilee my love

• Artist: prettypink65
• Description: a poem/song of the woman i seem to have fallen for.
• Date: 02/18/2009
• Tags: emilee love

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emile:
i love the way you smile,
i long to hear your lauph,
your chocolate hair and deep brown eyes will melt my soul for ever more. you say that you are nothing but my sweet, you are everything to me! i only get up in the morning to see your glowing face and personality. i need you... i love you.
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ps: emilee! if you read this, i do love you! do you love me? biggrin heart





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Comments

[the bomb is kewl564]

awwww, so sweeettttt.

[Cottoncandyocbra3]

I hate to break it to you, but I don't really see this as a poem. The grammar mistakes, the typos, the spelling errors, the general lack of imagery, or originality. This is bland material. I recommend either coming up with a better premise, or using tasteful imagery, not uncreative ideas such as this.