save me

• Artist: zebppir
• Description: Honesty Greatly Valued or HGV
  
  
  I came up with this on the way from school and I decided to post this song
  
  
  
  and who knows maybe this will help someone other than myself
  
  Comments deeply welcome
• Date: 02/18/2009
• Tags: saveme

Oh! Lord on high

Deliver me

from such an unatural affliction

from such unbearable oppression

save me from depression


Oh!!!save mine heart

I no longer care

send an angel or sinner it no longer matters

when my soul is in tatters

someone to hold me, to hug me

to help me stand

in the dark abyss

all I want is bliss *pause*



Lord deliver me

from an unimaginable affliction

from such a cruel depression


someone hug me, hold me

help me stand


saint or sinner any in demand


to help me escape such an unbreakable brand


Oh lord help me land*pause*


sands of recession

bleak reflections

blank deflections

anger, suspicion

Saint, Sinner

help me stand

hold me, hug me

love me...

*reprisal*

Comments

[zebppir]

thanks for commenting ^_^

[Cottoncandyocbra3]

Not too bad. Somewhat emotional. Clear and tangible, without being too boring. Acceptable poem, good sir. A bit plain, but fine. 3/5.

[Sorikia525]

I like it, well done, ^_^