dream

• Artist: xoxoxdemon_angelxoxo
• Description: this is about a dream who is telling......
• Date: 02/20/2009
• Tags: dream

I'm as dark as any night. I am your dreams.
I'm a shadow in the light. I am your dreams.
I work to serve the one that pays . I am your dreAMS
but i cannot say, for i do not dare , for my master stares,
with huge red eyes that peirce your very soul. he is your

NIGHTMARE!!!!!!!!!!!!

I hope you like it can you comment as well plz thankz

Comments

[Husk3]

I think the whole NIGHTMARE!!!!!!!!!!!! thing was over dramatic.
The fourth line also sounds a little wierd too--- maybe something like..

"But I cannot say, for I do not dare under masters glare.
With huge red eyes that pierce your very soul-
He is your Nightmare."

But they're only suggestions, no offense intended.