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Twas the night before christmas,
And all through the house,
Every creature was sleeping,
Including the mouse,
But not me, oh no,
I was busy plopping,
Some things in my buggy,
From some last minute shopping,
When I finally got home,
I was tired and weary,
Ready to lie down,
Yet something felt dreary,
Then I heard a voice say,
Now what about me?,
As I spun around fast,
And then fell to my knees,
Then I realized,
That no one was around,
Yet I heard it again,
That questioning sound,
You did all the shopping,
And now you're all done,
But what about me?,
Where have I gone?,
You haven't prayed once,
Not even for dinner,
As for you're to do list,
It's getting thinner,
Devotions are gone,
Prayer's been taken away,
And you don't notice me,
Even on my birthday,
I realized now,
That the voice was the Lord,
I'm sorry I said,
I'll notice you more,
And not just me, no,
there's more to do,
You must also love,
You're children too,
I'll try Lord,
I honestly will,
I know toys aren't enough,
To pay their bill,
It never happened again,
And I always remind us,
We should give extra care,
To the Lord on Christmas!
- by Michi-chan 137 |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 02/20/2009 |
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- Title: The Gift of Christmas
- Artist: Michi-chan 137
- Description: This is absolutely my FAVORITE poem that i ever wrote!
- Date: 02/20/2009
- Tags: gift christmas
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Comments (5 Comments)
- DDrox316 - 07/22/2010
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I feel that way about Christmas... and even religion too. i wrote a poem about being confirmed...
oh haha enough about me! I love it! ;D *favorite* - Report As Spam
- kittyanimefreak - 05/16/2010
- i love it its soo realistic and sweet. it just goes to show that christmas is too comericial. and that the point of christmas is to celabrate the birth of christ. not to celebrate the end of the year but a new beginning i hear, one where we start a fresh and all is forgoten from the bad parts of last year to meet with family and friends what is to come.
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- EmeraldxTurtle - 02/25/2009
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i love it!!! you're right. we don't take enough out of our lives to give thanks. won't lie when i say that christmas has gotten to material and i too have allowed that to happen.
5/5 for an eye opening poem! - Report As Spam
- angel_incogneto - 02/23/2009
- Please, correct me if I was wrong.
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- angel_incogneto - 02/23/2009
- I loved it, just at the end.. Sorry to say, but you shoudn't take one day to give extra to the Lord. Look at all we have and are able to do. Don't you think we were given it for the joy of me and you? But, my point is.. Just because Christmas time is around, it doesn't mean you have to give extra care. You should do it on any and every day just to show you notice that the lord is still there. Once or twice may seem enough, yet there isn't a price on love.
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