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Rain, coming down to earth with a pound, pound, pound.
Beating itself upon the the helpless, defenseless ground.
Not stopping to ask how it feels to be whipped by its forceful strike each time it comes to Earth to say hello.
So please next time you come down here, ask before you collide carelessly into the helpless, defenseless ground.
Don't be rude!
- Title: Rain
- Artist: Daease
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Description:
My poem is free verse.(which you probably already knew that). Please if you don't like it don't be to harsh.
Hope you like it though!
Enjoy! - Date: 02/20/2009
- Tags: rain
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Comments (4 Comments)
- 0DD_S3X - 06/19/2010
- rlli nice a bit of free verse with a dash of rhyme!! smile )
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- terror_me - 12/20/2009
- nice the ryhmes r fabulous
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- greengrl6 - 02/22/2009
- very nice poem. i like it very much.
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- brandan_romance - 02/20/2009
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beutiful
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