death

• Artist: tucker21
• Description:
• Date: 02/20/2009
• Tags: death

Death comes for us all
it is a cage we cannot escape
its bars are tough and iron
we cannot see them...
but they are there..
they chomp down on innocent hearts
with their teeth of iron
ripping and tearing the life away
I feel life creeping away through the bars
away from my grasp
my eyes start to fall...
into a deep sleep..
from which i will not awake
my heart pounds its last..
but i race towards the light
run,run! i push my self harder through the pain
but my eyes fall
into darkness...
but wait...
light squeazes through my lifeless lids
only to wake to see a wonderfal new world ...
again i live...
a new better life...
heaven...

Comments

[tucker21]

hey its ur choice to read this or not if any thing i dont mind criticsum but aleast me some credit for tryin so w/e i dont care if u like my poems or not so aleast tell me how to fix my mistakes so i can get better at doing what i take joy in but ur just a jerk so i could carless wat u think

[Cottoncandyocbra3]

Heaven is about as real as your god damn talent. This weak poem is full of grammatical and spelling errors. I feel cheated out of life and sanity after having read this disgrace to art.