sis i never had

• Artist: aegirl80
• Description: this poem is 4 aeropostell1
• Date: 02/21/2009
• Tags: never

We met when we were young,
friends ever since,
always there for me,
always there for you,
Sister I never had,
Yeah that's you.

Times when we couldn't stop laughing,
when we laugh about the funniest things,
when we laugh about the stupidest things,
both here in times of laughter,
sister I never Had,
Yeah that's you.

Times of when we couldn't stop crying,
sometimes about the saddest things,
sometimes about the funniest things,
both here for each other with an open shoulder to cry on.
Sister I never had,
Yeah that's you.

Times of when we stay up all hours of the night talking,
talking about what ever is on our minds,
I talk,
You talk,
I listen,
You listen,
Sister I never had,
Yeah that's you.

We are here for each other at all times,
Times of sadness,
Times of madness,
Times of joy.
We have always been there for each other,
always,
We will be there for each other,
always,
Sister I never had,
Yeah that's you!!

Comments

[Aeropostell1]

thanks..... your awsome. (i like the poem a lot)! ur the best bff EVER!

[Happy-Go-Lucky Bear]

"We met when we were young,
friends ever since,
always there for me,
always there for you,
Sister I never had,
Yeah that's you." <--

I see that you only used 'you' twice, but it doesn't sound great. Read it back to yourself, and maybe you will find another word to use instead of 'you'. I like piece as a whole, though. ^_^