red rose, black rose

• Artist: Olivia Anderson
• Description:
• Date: 02/26/2009
• Tags: rose black rose

yout touch is gentle, mine is kind!
your rose is black
mine is red
your leaking red
ii'm leaking black
we're a match!! smile heart heart

Comments

[Sunafire]

I don't want to sound mean so i'll start of with the good point!
A very nice topic and idea behind it, contrasting the two people.
But you could improve it by perhaps having more structure, more metaphors etc biggrin