Broken Body

• Artist: TOXiCKiiSS x
• Description: i was half asleep when i thought of this so yeah.....
• Date: 02/28/2009
• Tags: broken body

I try to hide the hidden tears I cry,
The broken body there lies.
I walk over and pry you off holding you and weeping with you.
You close your eyes and and cry harder then ever knowing not what to do.
We watch as his body is taken in the war,knowing he was an idiot but a hero none the less.
We watch as his soul goes to heaven but not before he gives you love and apologizing endlessly,knowing that he hurt you.
He closes his eyes and his breath slowly comes to a rest.
You sob harder knowing he's gone forever and that you will honour him and know that you were his wife and he did this for you.

Comments

[Sadistic Lovyr]

Depressing.I like it.

[xxxCD7xxx]

nice

[l Captivate l]

cutee, not bad.

[Shadow on the Hill]

not bad hehe, i like the idea fo it. use more advance words, like "him being gone forever isnt very mundane, but you will always feel for him the same..." i know thats not a good set-up, but you did good for half asleep, id like to see you wake ^^