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i come into the room, unoticed by everyone, thinking i don't exist, weren't born. thinking if i wasn't here would life be better without me? if i died then would anyone cry? would anyone laugh?
who knows.
did any of my friends respect me or notice me, if i even have any real friends, do i have friends to trust, is there anyone i could talk to, or will there be no one.
do my emotions show on my face? does anyone notice if i'm depressed or upset? does anybody see me or hear my quiet voice speak or has all the saddness gone into only my arms.
does anyone notice the kindness or do they only see the evil side of me? that is the problem.
emo
Comments (4 Comments)
- Yamina Himora - 03/05/2009
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Ignore those under my comment. It needs work on grammer and the set up, but otherwise very good. I know how you feel.
5/5* and I added it to my favorites. - Report As Spam
- TheLonlyKing - 03/04/2009
- I couldn't even finish it because, I didn't even know WTF was going on in the art or whatever you want to call this.
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- Olivia Anderson - 03/04/2009
- no offense but ur more emo than me!!!!!
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- Cloffing Pempslider - 03/02/2009
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sucks
seriously please don't write anything else until you learn how to write a sentence and what poetry actually is
regards - Report As Spam
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