What have I done?

• Artist: Master babybug_13
• Description: A wierd poem, also posted in the dark poetry guild.
• Date: 03/01/2009
• Tags: murder knife lightning

I held the knife in my hand as I walked down the hall,
I quietly opened the door,
I walked to her bed,
I raised the knife, then slammed it into her chest,
Her blood poured onto the floor,
I fell to me knees and started to sob.
And as lightning flashed in the sky,
I asked myself a single question,
What have I done?

Comments

[the real kooki]

it gothic

[beara_bunny_booboo]

it rocks!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!11111

[Silent_Loverpx]

*sigh* 1/5 srry but I really hate ppl that kill other innocent ppl. Plus blood makes me vomit.

[Twix92]

its like a story but its alright..anything can be a poem.
3/5 at the part where the gurl stab herself you should say
"Iraised the knife, then slammed it into my chest"
it is suppose to be first person so keep it to first person...