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Dagger of Sadness
There is a dagger of sadness,
A dagger of sadness that sticks me,
Me in my hart where it hurts most,
To the point where it is unberible,
Through my lifes ups & downs it,
It has always stabbed me in my heart,
I am tiered of this dagger of sadness.
- by Now_I_Am_Nubia |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 03/01/2009 |
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- Title: Dagger of Sadness
- Artist: Now_I_Am_Nubia
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- Date: 03/01/2009
- Tags: dagger sadness
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Comments (2 Comments)
- SteveNash13rox - 03/05/2009
- i agree 1.5/5
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- Cottoncandyocbra3 - 03/02/2009
- Very rough and unpolished. Without any real cohesive structure, this poem is dragged down by its unneeded repetition, and lack of imagery. 2/5.
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