Lust

• Artist: A Illuminated Bat
• Description: This is a poem about a guy that I really like will I hope you all like it.
• Date: 03/03/2009
• Tags: lust

LUST
The lust I have for you is hard to handle.
The lust I have for you is hard for me to deny.
The lust I have for you is hard to bear.
The lust I have for you is hard to understand.
The lust I have for you is hard for anyone to understand.
Why is the lust I have for you so hard to handle, deny , bear , and understand?
Can anyone answer why the lust for him is so hard to handle, deny , and understand?
Why is the lust hard to control?
Why is it that I lust for you all the time?
The lust I have for him is hard to get over.
The lust I have for him always keeps him on my mind.
Why is lust such a powerful thing?
Can lust be controlled?
The lust that I try to hide comes out when he is around.
The lust that I can’t deny only shows when he is gone.
The lust that I have to bear shows only when I am alone.
The lust that I can’t understand clouds my thoughts.
The lust that nobody can understand is because they don’t love him like I do.
The lust is hard to control because he is so tender and dear to me.

By : Chrissy

Comments

[the little we know]

i do understand that "lust" is the name of the poem,
but i lost interest in it after a few lines because it is repeated to often.
maybe use a metaphor for lust?
it's good, but maybe needs a little work.
and i am not trying to be mean, just give some constructive criticism

[Excavated Heart]

i like it!

[A Illuminated Bat]

I hope you all like it!!!