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You were the only one i can trust
The one that made me felt safe
The one i could run to when i got hurt
But
You hurt me
So i can hurt you
You broke me
So i can brake you
But the worst of all
You loved me
I loved you
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- by XoXo_DORKY_XoXo |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 03/12/2009 |
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- Title: The Dead Rose
- Artist: XoXo_DORKY_XoXo
- Description: I hope you like it... i never felt this way i just wanted to write something that ppl will like PLEASE NO BAD COMMENTS IM NOT THE BEST POET!!
- Date: 03/12/2009
- Tags: dead rose
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Comments (4 Comments)
- moii4 - 04/09/2009
- no affence to the author, i mean it is a great poem and all, but you people keep making sad poetry.life is not that much like a spriling black hole going straight to hell. life is not as bad as people say. but for now, that poem is beautiful and you s
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- shizuni_angeldevil - 03/18/2009
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i like it i can relate.....it...nice one....
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- OneWithDunamis - 03/14/2009
- Poor grammar brings it down...
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- Adumbral_Abyss - 03/13/2009
- I like it! But you did spell "break" wrong... but no biggy! Still, keep writing! I do a similar thing... Check mine out!
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