A Recipe for Breaking Up

• Artist: emotional music lover
• Description: This is about me and all the lovers that have broken up and this is how i felt and i put it in a recipe
• Date: 03/12/2009
• Tags: recipe breakingsorrow

take a sad person that has just broken up,
add 2 cups of love,1 cup of hate.and 3 cups of moving on,
mix everything together in a big pot and add 5 cups of tears,
stir in 2 cups of sorrow,
mix untill you have a big pot of goodbyes,
sprinle some sugar to heal the scars,
you can tell when it is done because you do not hurt as much any longer.
add some spice and some fire.
when you taste ,youre heart will be cured.
if u have any left,
store it some where in youre heart! heart

Comments

[Long~Lost~Dream]

Very unique style of writing. Maybe a ryhme scheme could be something for you to figure out. I do like the whole "recipe" idea. Very imaginative. In time you'll progress, in the meanwhile keep writing.

[SagebrushRebel]

well I thought it was okay. you're just writing your feelings. you're not a perfect poet yet. (: Keep Writing!!!!!! I most certainly was awful when I first started. Just don't give up (: