Simple Tears on Wicked Flowers

• Artist: Candii_Courtney
• Description: wicked tears on simple flowers
  clouds above and sun rays shining
  pray another day to keep
  So all the world is light and free
  
  ...this is kind of a happy poem :D if you can see the happiness in this poem you get a gold star :D *shines gold star* *0*
• Date: 03/13/2009
• Tags: simple tears wicked flowers

wicked tears on simple flowers
clouds above and sun rays shining
pray another day to keep
So all the world is light and free

wicked tears and simple flowers
clouds above and sun rays shining
waiting in patience
for fire to come

All beings are waiting for these prayers tonight

wicked tears on simple flowers
clouds above and sun rays shining
waiting in patience
for the earth to believe

wicked tears on simple flowers
clouds above and sun rays shining
waiting in patience
this peace of wind

I wait and say my prayers again

wicked tears on simple flowers
clouds above and sun rays shining
waiting in patience
the water is calm

repeating my prayers again and again

Comments

[Scard23]

Excellent imagery!

[Guilty_Fills_Over]

Some Grammar Errors But on the other hand very good. 4/5

[xxxxshavalxxxx]

I LIKE THIS ONE A WHOLE LOT... VERY WELL DONE!