The fall

• Artist: yanksforlife123
• Description: I look in her eyes and thats where it begins
  
  I fall for her and thats where it ends....
  
  I watch the leaves fall as she falls
  
  She is the one i know it
  
  How she strives makes winter chills
  
  The way she walks makes summer warm
  
  And all i want to say is "its ok.."
• Date: 03/17/2009
• Tags: fall

lol ok ya im not a poem dude so ya i threw words together and ya lol

Comments

[dares2dream]

Oh my gosh Brandon...I didn't know you could write like that! It's really, really good! I mean it. x3

[IHeartUForever_101]

AWWWW!! LOL i think its really nice....really i do!! ......

[i_dream_of_sunshine]

wow rivera nice poem!! it's AWESOME! i really don't believe u since u said that u just threw it together...

[Mokonae]

its cool, but the description should be changed withe the things on top..but otherwise its great!

[Sky Yam]

It's really good...makes me somewhat melancholy, though.

[Done xP]

Dude, this is so radical 8D

Haha, really nice. I love how you gave it a different outlook on the ways others would visually see it. Especially since it's so abstract and it describes the emotional physique of the adolescent these days xP

Haha translation: Five Stars dooood *****