i wish you were there

• Artist: Ms Make Me Smile
• Description: written when i was very unhappy and i wished i was dead rate and comment please and if you want ill rate back thank you. oh yeah the idea came from a story im writting where this guy commits suicide
• Date: 03/21/2009
• Tags: wish were there

i wish you were here as i said my last harah
i wish you could have held me close as i lay there dying
i wish you could have convinced me not to make this final sin

but you couldnt
you couldnt stop me
you couldnt save me
my living wasnt choice
but my death is


i dont wish you pain for what ive done
and im sorry for the pain this might cause you
but your better off one day waking up me dead
than one day waking up and regretting our friendship

im sorry that all your trying was for not
but believe me when i say these final words
to me your not a friend
your so much more
to the world you may mean nothing
but one day theyll see you for who you truly are
someone who tried to save me but never could
im sorry
goodbye and goodnight

Comments

[Hekibel]

Erm, by 'harah' did you mean 'hoorah' or 'hurrah'?

Despite the grammatical errors (sorry, I'm a**l about things like that) it's very good.

[FaLlInG oUt Of ToDaY]

i love it. its very beautiful. most of my poems dont turn out this good. i love it though as i said b4

[-lightning kisses-]

its beautiful!