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this page was blank
4 seconds past
minutes gone
flying past
like crazy thoughts
invade my head
and clocks run back
as blood runs not as
red as youd expect
but crimson nontheless
perfection stains perfection
to create a bloody mess
and as my head falls fifteen storys
to the pillow at my feet
thoughts colide and life devides
as I fold you at the crease
if my calloused hands
could find a way
to inocence and bliss
then your freightned figure'd
fit right in
its just a swing and a miss
to the balcony where we can see the origin of sin
and its pretty i guess
ya its pretty i guess
a simple songs
the one i sing
about the birds and bees
and everything
the job to which
your fathers wed
and the drink your mother
loved instead
our hands record
each other line
as your fingers intertwine
with mine
to make a song
more briliant than
the acumulation of
all our plans
its out of our hands
but im not that boy
your not that girl
this isnt our song
and this isnt your world
roses aint red
and violets aint blue
my head is empty
now how bout you
time she is wasting
not sure if i care
falling forever
lost in your stare
glad to be there
baby i swear
Comments (3 Comments)
- Sunafire - 03/30/2009
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Fix the punctuation!
Other than that, yeah it's not too bad, kinda a bit long, with nothing to keep it together, like a repetitive phrase.
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- goldenheart8 - 03/30/2009
- Great. Like it. biggrin
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- Donnie_Dark - 03/25/2009
- this is cool biggrin
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