Someday it will end

• Artist: Yuhuki
• Description: There is an ending for everything,
  And it starts at the moment it begins.
  With the question ‘will it be a happy ending’
  Or does the story sadly ends.
  Nothing is certain in this life time.
  At the end it will all disappear.
  Someday it will end,
  From day it begins.
• Date: 03/28/2009
• Tags: someday will

Well i like to make poems so i'm placing my first poem right now wink

Comments

[WobbleJWeebles]

>.> You put the poem and the description in the wrong places.
But it is a good poem.

[Miekka Kuoleman]

extremely well written the only thing, the line "Or does the story sadly ends." maybe switch 'ends' and 'sadly' around, 'end sadly' would have made more sense. 'sadly ends' gives me the idea that something is ending, how ever '...end sadly' gives the idea of a bad ending, after all you are on to something there. not all endings are necessarily negative.

[Daddy Got This Account]

its a good poem, but you switched places with the poem and description. ^^"