Abuse

• Artist: Chastity Flanderz
• Description: Now, I have never been physically abused, but I along with many other have been mentally abused.
  Although this mentions a boy and girl it could be two girls or two boys or a group of people abusing one of them.
  This is my mixed-up jumpled-up feelings on the matter.
  Comment please
• Date: 03/30/2009
• Tags: abuse

Side step by,
On the path of life,
No inclination,
Essence of inflation,
Deplete of bodies brushed.

They say the person,
Perfect for you,
A stranger upon the street.
Slight glances?
Double takes?
Mental memoires,
Void of everything.

Pain a rises,
Grand suits, no penthouses.
Love you find is failing,
Memoires relinquishing.

Mindless; Heartless,
Ditches.
Airless; Sunless,
Spaces.
In danger of suffocating.

Bruises; Marks;
Symbols,
Rising.
The monster,
Lucifer of your being,
His anger pulsating,
Activating the fast abuse.

Slither into silence,
Hightail it to a new level.
Drugs; Mutilation; no Self Preservation.
Monster number two;
Contentment; Oblivion.

The right guy,
Wrong girl,
The one who walked by.

Comments

[Aryeec]

In my opinion, this is one of your strongest poems. 5/5

[Atheshya]

Oh wow this is good. And a lot of the lines just SOUND good, like 'Deplete of bodies brushed.' There also seems to be a rhythm to this... this would probobly be fun to read aloud. Good job at telling the story too... this is a narrative poem that remembers to be poetic, too.

[TheDarkArtist]

Wow... intense