Boy Will Be Boys

• Artist: UnConCeivAble
• Description: Don't Like This AT ALL.
  My English Teacher Had Us Write A Poem In Iambic Pentameter.
  I Did It Completely Wrong But This Is It.
  I Just Can't Write At School.
  I KNOW IT'S BAD.
  So DON'T Tell Me How Much It Sucks.
  ( I Still Want Your Opinions.)
  & I KNOW THE TITLE HAS NOTHING TO DO WITH THE POEM.
  I'm Random Like That.
  Anyways.
  Thanks For All The Support, My Fans!! :B
  Much Appreciation
  
  ~Enjoy(If You Can)
  Kris~
  
  P.S. Search My Name For Other Poems & My Photography!
  
  Thanks Again!
• Date: 03/31/2009
• Tags: window water precipitation cold weather

I pressed my face close,
careful not to touch.

Cold dispersed from the glass.
i felt its shiver.

My breath causing little clouds of moisture,
water beading,
water sliding,
water dripping,

water crystallizing,
from deathly cold weather dreams.

Comments

[Buttercup Veela]

i like that (even if its not iambic pantameter) did u have to do some sort of shakespherean poem?