Rave Lights

• Artist: ZeldaXnXRainbowsss
• Description: Tell me what I did wrong if you rate less than 5...thanks.
  
  
  
• Date: 03/31/2009
• Tags: glisster

Neon glow glitter in the light
Destined to party until it's bright
Boombox dance techno trance
Glowsticks shimmer at first glance
Dancefloors animate rainbow hue
Forcing you to rave, too
Eternal ablaze neon road
Dance lights euphoric mode
Magical moments to feel the rave
Move upon color to crave
Beats give you vibrant notion
Put your glowsticks in lightning motion
Rave lights oh dance nights
Mark all these vivid sites

Comments

[ruroukenluver13]

ok that sounds REALLY cool i would love to be at that party!
^_^

[NostaIgia]

I like how your poem painted a mental picture! Only good poems do that. I'll give you a 5/5, but just remember to be more grammatically correct... like using punctuation marks. xD