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I am alone in this crowd.
All to myself, abandoned at heart.
Make all the world silent! It tears me apart!
Can my life get any lower, this is what my mind thinks.
On my own, the only light of hope blinks.
Like mercury in a thermometer, all of my life sinks.
Down and alone, my life has no links.
Abandoned again, to ponder my lack of a heart.
Nobody listens, they pass on, not even giving me a fresh start.
Down on the ground I kneel, broken apart.
Accused of wrong, and rightfully so.
Lonely, in pain, my own injuries I sew.
Off to make a friend, though I already know.
No energy to run, but everywhere to go.
Every day passes, as my heart continues to sink low.
...but nobody notices....
... life goes on.
- by 290DarkStars |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 04/01/2009 |
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- Title: Thermometer of My Heart
- Artist: 290DarkStars
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Description:
Find the hidden message,
and if you are brave enough to read it.
MYGOSH PEOPLE COMMENT! - Date: 04/01/2009
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Comments (7 Comments)
- 1so_so11rry_ari11 - 10/24/2009
- I don't want to be a damn cliche and be like "I'm here for you darky" cause that's just not me... cuz that would be really hypocritical (spelling is wrong i think) but I can't make any promises that I'll stay by u forever... but I do hope so and I'm here so if you have something to say just type and i'll read xD
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- carlinie-the lezzy - 09/22/2009
- wow i get this i see what you're going through wwhich explains all your other peotry about not finding a wife, wow i'm so sorry i know it does not mean much but i truly am sorry, my prayers go out to you.
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- SiciIienne - 09/18/2009
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I really liked the poem. I could never write that good.
Very well written. 5/5 - Report As Spam
- Daddy Got This Account - 06/04/2009
- i agree with veela. as long as i breathe, and my heart has a pulse, and i can still talk to you, i will always be here to help you through what ever challenge you face. and i still like the poem alot. still 5/5
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- Blackfire Banshee - 06/04/2009
- damn. i get it.
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- Buttercup Veela - 04/14/2009
- hey, dont worry, as long as im ur friend, u will never b alone. ok? 5/5
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- Anthems_Angel - 04/09/2009
- wow thats really hurtful and im sorry to hear that too 55
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