hurt me, my lover

• Artist: amen phath
• Description: this is just ummm, a writing. im not reallly good at writing, but this is best i can do when all there left is a broken heart from the one u love.
• Date: 04/02/2009
• Tags: hurt lover

you were my soul, you were my life.
now that yur gone, in the bitterness,
I need you back. I need to see you.
I want you to answer me, answer to my newest questions.
you were my home, my friend, my heart,
since the day you you and her, I am nobody to you.
now I see I dont even existed to you.
you're still in my heart, but im invisible to you.

Comments

[KTS]

You need a little work with the U and the I's

So a 3 star

[kris_stella]

i rated 3,
bcuz even,. uhm , its not really sumtng magnificant,
i can appriciate the thought^^