him

• Artist: lost in my frozen dreams
• Description: i write poems because of my mood. try and gusse this. its not one of my best
• Date: 04/04/2009
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i gave up so much for him
but he dosent see
he treats me like another girl
am i blind?
i show him my poems before anyone else
i smother him with gifts and is always nice
but just the esence of him makes me smile
he cheers me up
what should i do?

Comments

[Jarmis]

I get where you're coming from... I've been there before.
It's a good place to start with a poem, but as a finished product it's not fantastic or anything.

Maybe work it out a little more? I'd love to reread it if you did biggrin

[Chlobell98]

awesome......