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Taken
One last sight
One last taste
One last touch
One last good bye
One last kiss
And
One last
Breath.
- by mel-_-mel345 |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 04/06/2009 |
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- Title: Taken
- Artist: mel-_-mel345
- Description: A random poem I made cause I stayed home from school so it's not that great:D but I tryed
- Date: 04/06/2009
- Tags: taken
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Comments (2 Comments)
- HowTheGrinchStoleRamadan - 04/06/2009
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Eh, it's lacking *shrug*
Not much more I can say about it.
Keep writing though, I'd like to see some of your other work if this is just a rushed unplanned piece - Report As Spam
- Paples - 04/06/2009
- nice mello
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