Liquid Sin

• Artist: Vivid Fizz
• Description: I made this poem almost a year ago when my mother and my friend's husband were going through a hard patch with drug addiction. I decided to write the poem through their eyes and how they viewed themselves at that point.
  
  I asked first and the answers gave me the inspiration to craft this. I hope that you all like it. I normally don't write poems so I hope I did a decent job.
• Date: 04/06/2009
• Tags: liquid

Here I am again
Just me alone
With Liquid Sin
Beneath my Bones

I take the needle
Pierce my skin
Watch it crawl
With Liquid Sin


This isn't right
The rush within
So far from home
With Liquid Sin


Feels so Good
This feeling in
That I get
With Liquid Sin


I try to stop
But I can't win
Half way dead
With Liquid Sin


Here I am again
Just me Alone
With Liquid Sin
Beneath my Bones

Comments

[changeisthebest]

LUFFFEEDDD ITTT smile ))

[cloud_dreamer97]

OMG ILUV IT!!!!!!!!! 5/5 >.<

[Vivid Fizz]

Thank you very much!

[DiamondUsagi]

Its sad. Its also a 5/5 very creative.