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My mood is down
What does my face show
nothing but a frown
will you help me?
Or Will you leave me be?
I’m already so sad
go ahead do it make me mad
watch me burn watch me die
go ahead already and make me cry
i hate you so much
all it takes is one touch
do you notice it at all?
that your letting me slip letting me fall?
no u don’t notice at all
u just push me down and make me crawl
Yes when I talk about me
Are you really listening? Do you really see?
Its not always you sometimes its me
I don’t care anymore
I know the truth for sure
I’m so annoying to you
Are you going to tell me its true?
Yes of course you’ve said it so many times before
I don’t know why I bother I just hurt you more and more
Listen to me plead
Help me and believe
That most of the things I say aren’t true
Don’t say it again I already know already that I’m cruel
Don’t they always say forgive and forget
Why cant you do that?
And forget the things you’ve kept
They’re all in solid stone
Please Listen to me…
And don’t leave me Alone
- by XxDarkxKillerxX |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 04/09/2009 |
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- Title: Listen to Me
- Artist: XxDarkxKillerxX
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Description:
umm well this is a poem i wrote dedicated to a friend
a very close friend...i should say my sister
it just says how i feel about her
its all different feelings
comment - Date: 04/09/2009
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Comments (6 Comments)
- Hariban - 05/16/2009
- Bravo. *clap clap*
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- XxDarkxKillerxX - 04/19/2009
- thank you all for commenting >-<
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- nikkyp533 - 04/13/2009
- I love it, it's got a solid rhythm, good emotion, it's really good. love it, 5/5
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- cooll666725 - 04/10/2009
- Very good for emotion. The rhythm could be better, but over all it's very good. 4/5
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- crazeythumper - 04/10/2009
- i luv it
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- awai mitsukai - 04/10/2009
- it very good it shows the true emotion of wat somtime evry one feels it truly a great peom
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