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I once meat a angel
who taught me many things
the angel even told me tales
from the time she was alive
she explained to me
about the world
and told me what she has done
as a angel she seamd so wonderfull
but one day she has to go back
to heaven she promised come vist me
but she never came back at all I waited so many
years to see her face one more time
but she never showed up
so I begin to cry
untell I relized
that I would see her wean I die
- by Onion Princess |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 04/13/2009 |
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- Title: Angel
- Artist: Onion Princess
- Description: I poem about me meating a angel I gusse
- Date: 04/13/2009
- Tags: angel
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Comments (4 Comments)
- Princesses Allelujah - 04/16/2009
- you did a good job though i say you could have made bits of it make more since such as not cutting out words or finishing the words because in those parts it does not sound that good but great poem i love the ryme the rythme and mostly the meaning the meaning is more important to me than how they are done
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- XxBaddest_ChickxX - 04/16/2009
- its good not that bad thoe
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- Caesura Caelum - 04/15/2009
- heh, i liked this one, good job.
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