I Am So Sorry

• Artist: kannair
• Description: read and comment on my poetry
• Date: 04/13/2009
• Tags: sorry

We saw you walking alone
My friend called you a slut
I saw the hurt in your eyes
As you winced and kept them shut...

There was the rumour about the one night stand
I helped spread the lies
I'm so sorry i ruined you life
I was just to deaf to hear your lies...

I remember sticking my foot out
I knew it was gonna hurt
But me and my friend just laughed
As your face hit the dirt...

I saw you the next day at school
That scar on your head
I should of said sorry
But i just laughed instead...

That scar it haunts my
In my dreams every night
I'm sorry that i hurt you
But it made me see the light...

Now Three years on
We're really good friends
But i can still see that scar
So my torment never ends...

I know that you forgive me
But i always will regret
That scar i put upon yor face
The scar i cant forget...

Comments

[x0StrawberryLemonade0x]

:'( Beautiful, touching, saddening, just simply gorgeous!

If it makes you laugh,
If it makes you cry,
If it rips out your heart,
It's a beautiful poem.

Your #1 fan!! (Still!)

Vote for me in the poetry and lyrics arena! biggrin (This is a Siggy)

[EM0Tii0NAL]

that was beautiful 5/5

[Kikyo Demon of Fire]

sometimes your writing inspires me to do great things. this is not writin though, this is a piece of art work!

[livingdespitedeath]

you are forgiven only when you can forgive yourself, please let go of your anger, let it be...if one has forgiven you should be free,but your not so the pain and strife will continue, but thats alright...its your choice

[XoStrawberry_ToxicXo]

some of the lines are like j**z in my pants
but their different b/c their opposite
great job
5/5 biggrin

[kannair]

ya

[insert_name_here_3]

wow you were mean but its really sweet that you wrote this. most people just don't have the heart to say that they were wrong.