We're all lost

• Artist: II Nightmare Moon II
• Description: There is nothing to say it is in the poem itself
  Comment please..
• Date: 04/13/2009
• Tags: lost before

You dont seem to understand
I cant be who you want me to be
that isnt me.
I've tried
I've Failed,
You've sighed
You've cried.
I'm close enought to kiss the sky
yet I'm laying here down on earth
I've sent you a message,
it is small
it is round,
it is hard to be found
it will hurt to read,
your tears will fall
when I'm found you will be left with a void
I am not the one you want
do not try to make me what i am not
You will try and you will fail
You try again
and again
i find myself falling
it is the same old thing
no one listens
for there is no one to speak
there is no one to be seen
only i thought to be found
it is small
no existant at most
you will search
and hope you will find
that is your hope
the hope the one you want will be found
i am not that one
do not be confused
i am lost till i am found
i dont want to be hunted
i want to be found
found in a place of peace
in a world where there is no pain.
That world is out of all's reach,
i was close enough to kiss the sky
but i found myself lying on the ground.
I am lost
and i want to be found

Comments

[wolfspirit12223]

I like it. There is one thing that bothers me that a good portion of people do and that is the way they write. Their writing always reads like a statement with an airy tinge of staleness to it. No flow or rhythm and lack a variety of words. Your writing is not great BUT it certainly is above the rest. decent structure with a good meaning behind it.

[cooll666725]

I liked it a lot. XD Beautiful writing. I definitely agree with you about peace. XD You have awesome potential. You may want to look into joining my guild. It's all about poetry. You might like it. Here's the link http://www.gaiaonline.com/guilds/?gmode=index&guild_id=192671

[mappaline]

i think its very good