Future

• Artist: Crow_Vermance
• Description: My thoughts on daydreams and the impact they have on your view of reality.
• Date: 04/19/2009
• Tags: future daydreams

Future

The future is where we all go
And it holds such power
Over us with all its
Hopes, promises, and dreams.
I daydream of the
Future, but reality
Causes my daydreams
To be untrue, fake,
And sadness washes over me
As each of my daydreams of
The future shatters
Into a thousand pieces,
Tinkling like a wind chime
Blowing in the breeze
Of a future time
And place.

Comments

[Crow_Vermance]

I didn't think about that. It just happened.

[xxthexjakexx]

yea.it does look like a bomb? msg or comment me if that was intentional, its cool wink

[loverabies80s]

I like how your poem looks like an atomic bomb dropping and how as you're traveling down towards "the future shatters" you're getting closer and closer to the point of impact. But maybe the bomb shape wasn't your intent, it's just what I see and I think it's pretty cool BD