Would you...

• Artist: Asche Escaped
• Description: ???
• Date: 04/20/2009
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Would you save me if I was drowning right in front of you?
What would you do?
What if you tried to save me ,but got there a second too late.What would you do then?
Would you try to bring me to life?
Would you at least say 'I'll love you forever'?
Would you honor my last wish?
Would you just stand there with that concerned look on your face?
Would you dance around my casket with a smirk on your lips?
Would you say 'It's a tragdy' and go on with your life as if nothing happened?
Would you drop to your knees and beg god to take you instead?
Would you end your life too?Only because you love me that much.
In all truth i don't care what you do.All I want you to know is you could have Saved Me.

Comments

[xxxxshavalxxxx]

i like it itz darkly utsukushi (beautiful in Japanese) keep it up!

[Asche Escaped]

i will.& thanks even i still think it needs work.

[clumsy-story of my life]

its ok. maybe if you tried to add some more lines, and get deeper with what u say as each line goes, it might work a little better. if you could, read some of mine sometime if you get a chance.