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In that very second,
My heart stopped,
Everything went in slow motion,
I couldn't breathe.
Just knowing you won't be there,
For tomorrow, forever,
It's too much for me to take,
I don't want to loose you.
What would I be without...
having you there every second,
knowing your breathing,
your heart still beating.
Sorrow washed over my tear stained face,
Atleast let me in before this crumbles,
The walls are crashing down,
Burning towards our souls.
Rasping for breath,
I slowly whisper,
" let go of it all,
I'll do whatever it takes
to keep you here
..... forever."
- Title: my deathly whisper
- Artist: kannair
- Description: read and comment on my poetry
- Date: 04/22/2009
- Tags: deathly whisper
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Comments (3 Comments)
- semiconscious-soccer gal - 04/23/2009
- aw thats such a good one ^.^
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- Kikyo Demon of Fire - 04/22/2009
- *starts crying* Thats so sad! I love it so much!!!!!!
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- nightwing24 - 04/22/2009
- Its good,Keep them comin.
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